1° Pre Trailer, let me know ur opinion.

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1° Pre Trailer, let me know ur opinion.

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Hello everone!
This is a link to my 1° Animation made using TVP 10 Standard ediction:



It's a Pre-Trailer about Grendizer Goldorak robot (No Profit Project) 'n yes i need to know what u think about it: what's wrong 'n what is good in ur opinion, u r wellcome always!

Thank you :)
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The copyright about Goldorak Grendizer ufo robot series is about Go Nagai.
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The space ship with revolving blades looks great. Nice color choices too.
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Gochris1 wrote:The space ship with revolving blades looks great. Nice color choices too.
Whah Thank you! In my opinion is almost the worse scene but i really appreciated your opinion! :) Feel free to write what u look wrong in your opinion! :)
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The walk-cycle at 0:20 has a good timing, but it looks a bit stiff, like his hips couldn't move.
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schwarzgrau wrote:The walk-cycle at 0:20 has a good timing, but it looks a bit stiff, like his hips couldn't move.
Well, i think the walk cycle is good but i can undestand that the hips seems almost locked, thank you for your opinion! :)
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This is another scene, it's test, please let me know your opinion about it, what is wrong and what is good! Keep in mind that the scene is not complete, it need to complete the colors, the background movement.
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